Song Writing: A song for her...

This is a song i made up with a friend of mine...about 2 months ago i guess...made especially for her... =P

Its not exactly complete but its bout 3/4 way done...so enjoy...

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[Chorus]
Everytime I looked in your eyes,
I see the pain inside of you,
Something I wished I could erase,
Something that I tried to do.

But looks like my efforts turned to dust,
Looks like what I did wasn’t enough,
Now that I’m gone from your life,
The fire in my heart is snuffed…

[Rap/Verse 1]
Now all I need is a simple song,
to rest this wondering mind.
Wondering who really is at fault,
Knowing that it’s not my fault,
But sure wishing it was mine.

Thinking all day what I should I have done,
Wondering if I could somehow turn back time,
Change all the things that I have said,
Change all the things that I have done,
Just to make you feel happy and pleased,
To know that I’m always there in your time of need,
Please tell me girl if there is something I could do,
Not just write me off your life and make me feel like a tool.

[Chorus]

[Rap/Verse 2]
Your words pulled me out of a dark abyss,
yet now they sting like a viper's kiss,
my life was hanging on the thinnest thread,
and with you ignoring me that life is as good as dead,
Thought to heal my tainted soul,
yet you dug me a 6 foot deep hole.

[Chorus]

Writing credit to:
Unknown76 and FFW of PMT